Send a comment to this post and do the following.
1. Find a blog post that you would like me to read. It can be any post, the topic does not matter. I said before that it should be your “personal best” but it can be anything that you want me to look at and comment on. Maybe it is something that you are very proud of and want to show off, maybe it is something that you had a hard time with and want some suggestions. It is up to you.
2. Send a comment to this post. The comment should:
A. Have your name
B. Have the title and date of your blog entry
C. Write one sentence telling me why you decided on this one. Are you proud of it? Do you want some suggestions?
Mr. J
26 comments:
Can it be a poem or anything of that type?
Chris Connell
Something I Dread - 1.19.07
I decided to show you this one because I liked the descriptive language that I decided on using in this. I just want to see what you think of it
http://hxchris.blogspot.com/2007/01/descriptive-paragraph-morning-radio.html
Brittany, I would love to comment on a poem, please indicate one you would like me to read. But to get the full points you also have to include one of the assignments.
Mr. J
Thanks Chris for getting a head start on this.
Amiry Hottinger
Fahrenheit 451 pgs. 40-68
I decided on this entry because I thought I put alot of thought into my answers. I would also like to get some feedback on what you think.
http://amiryhottinger.blogspot.com/2007/01/fahrenheit-451-pgs-40-68_21.html
Austin Jones
Farenheit 451, pages 91-110 1/24/07
I chose this one because I have a question about Captain Beatty and Montag's friendship.
http://hthaustinjones.blogspot.com/2007/01/farenheit-451-pages-91-110.html
Olivia Perry
Something I Like/Look Forward To - 1.23.07
I wanted you to read this because I think I had the most fun with it. I also enjoyed using descriptive language so that it sounded almost poetic.
http://olivia-perry.blogspot.com/2007/01/descriptive-paragraph-colorful.html
JV Hill
DUE WED 1/24 Descriptive
Paragraph - Fun in the Forest
I would like you to read this entry because I think that this is like never before and thought that If Mr Ross liked it than maybe you would like it to.
http://jvhasanidea.blogspot.com/2007/01/discriptive-paragraph-fun-in-forest.html
Justin here... My personal best shalt be...
Fahreinheit 451 pp. 69-80
For what reason, you ask? I love the Allegory of the Cave (More so than "Lost World," and I think we all remember class this morning ;)), and it is a rare occurrence I get to speak of it in it's entirety.
Link here: http://justinshumanitiesblog.blogspot.com/2007/01/fahrenheit-451-pp-69-80-draft.html
Dulce Garcia
I wanted you to grade the pragraph on the thing i dread because i really put a lot of thought into it. I really enjoyed writing this paragraph!!!!
http://dulcegarcia.blogspot.com/2007/01/dread.html
Cameron Parvini
Farenheight 451 pp. 40-68
I liked writing this one a lot, it was interesting because of all the metaphors and such i used. I would love some feedback on it.
http://cameronparvini.blogspot.com/2007/01/farenheight-451-pp-40-68.html
A. Matthew McCauley
B. What I dread the most (Saturday, Janurary 20; 3:36 PM)
C. I selected this because I feel that I worked very hard on this essay and that I used alot of good vocabulary
D. http://matthewmccauley.blogspot.com/2007/01/what-i-dread-most.html
Jessi Jessi Jessi Mos
Something i enjoy- 1/23
i choose this peice because i like it
http://jessieatspancakes.blogspot.com/2007/01/descriptive-paragraph-something-i-like.html
BIANCA ZEPEDA!
Fahrenheit 451pp. 91 - 110
I decided on this piece because I work very hard on it and it is one of my personal favorites out of all the others I have written.
http://biancaissupacool.blogspot.com/2007/01/fahrenheit-451pp-91-110.html
Michael Murillo
What I dread-Sunday, January 21, 2007, 8:11 PM
I chose this one because I had a great time writing it and enjoyed using strong adjectives. I also wanted to know what I could do next time to make it better.
http://mmurillo07.blogspot.com/2007/01/what-i-dread.html
Alma Sanchez
Jan. 21, 07
I would like you to read this paragraph because everything I wrote was true. I also want you to tell me what you think about it.
http://almasanchez818.blogspot.com/2007/01/descriptive-paragraph-almas-dread.html
RG Huckins
Fahrenheit 451 pp. 21- 40
1/21/07
This might not have been my best blog entry but I liked it and thought it was vital to the plot of the story.
http://rhuckins-humanitiesblog2007.blogspot.com/2007/01/fahrenheit-451-pp-21-40_21.html
Chris Sefcik
Descriptive Paragraph - Sunday, January 21, 2007
I picked this one because it shows what I have to do everyday and why I always seem so exhausted. AND, I am pretty proud of this short piece. Yup.
http://hthjana-chrisefcik.blogspot.com/2007/01/descriptive-paragraph.html
This is my descriptive paragraph which I chose to do about music.
http://bethykurtz.blogspot.com/2007/01/descriptive-paragraph.html
I chose this one because I'm really proud of it, but it could probably be a little more descriptive.
Thanks,
Beth
You may comment on all of them if you want. I would love to have a comment on them to see what you think of them. Those are the only ones that I have written so far but I will keep posting the poems that I write.
I would want some suggestions or comments on the piece that I just wrote. I started writing this before you had assigned the assignment.
http://bdaviswantssuggestions.blogspot.com/
lishane bekele
what i most enjoy- 1.27.07
i dont know if you will give me credit because its late but i decided to show you this because i think its one of my best descriptive peices.
http://lishanehumanities.blogspot.com/2007/01/what-i-most-enjoy.html
eli hey mr j
i already sent you my favorit post
it was my first descriptive writing
Jonathan Villamar
Something I Dread - 1.21.07
I chose this one because i want to know what you think of this. i did not include much of the descriptive language but i did include some.
http://jonathanvillamar.blogspot.com/2007/01/something-i-dread.html
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