Send a comment to this post and do the following.
IT IS DUE FRIDAY MORNING, if you are late you will lose what should be easy points. That means you should do this at home on Thursday night.
1. Find a blog post that you would like me to comment on. It can be any post, the topic does not matter. I said before that it should be your “personal best,” but it can be anything that you want a comment on. Maybe it is something that you are very proud of and want to show off, maybe it is something that you had a hard time with and want some suggestions. It is up to you.
2. Send a comment to this post. The comment should:
A. Have your name
B. Have the title and date of your blog entry
C. Write one sentence telling me why you decided on this one. Are you proud of it? Do you want some suggestions?
D. It needs to have a URL link directly to the entry, not your home page
3. You will not get any points if you leave out any of these steps.
Mr. J
20 comments:
Austin Cook
What I Like...
Jan 23rd 2007 6:35
The reason why I wanted you to read this is because I think it is really good and because I want you to edit it.
http://austincook.blogspot.com/2007/01/what-i-like.html
Daniel Rodriguez
Fahrenheit 451 pp. 40-68
Sunday, January 21, 2007
I would like you to read this because i believe it's a good post and i would like your response on it.
http://danielrodriguez1.blogspot.com/2007/01/fahrenheit-451-pp-40-68.html
Kit Haggard
What I like. "Listening, Waiting, Watching"
Tuesday, January 23, 2007
http://kithaggard.blogspot.com/2007/01/listening-waiting-watching.html
I like thise piece more than anything else that I have written thus far. I REALLY like creative writing.
Kit
Dylan Della
http://dylandella.blogspot.com/2007/01/descriptive-paragraph.html
Jan 23rd 2007
I chose this one because I wanted to get one another opinion, if it's a good descriptive paragraph, or if I need to work on certain things.
Cindy Burgos
What I would like you to read is my descriptive Paragraph of what I dread the most.
My reason why I would like you to read my dread paragraph is because I want you to edit it because I was complemented that I did a great job on it and I wanted to see your opinion.
Cindy Burgos
What I would like you to read “What I dread the most”.
Thursday 25, 2006
http://cindyburgos.blogspot.com/2007/01/what-i-dread-most.html
My reason why I would like you to see my dread paragraph is because I want you to edit it and because I was complemented that I did a great job on it and I wanted to see your opinion.
Chance Bentley
Fahrenheit 451 Pgs. 91-110
01/24/07
I chose this one because I think I did a really good job on it and found some great figurative language. =)
http://chancebentley.blogspot.com/2007/01/fahrenheit-451-pgs-91-110.html
Bart Cordero
Something I Hate...
Sunday, January 21, 2007 12:33 PM
The reason i picked this post was because i thougth it was a good descriptive paragraph.And i was proud and i want some suggestions.
http://bartcordero.blogspot.com/2007/01/something-i-hate.html
susie madruga.
"descriptive writing II"
tuesday, january 23, 2007
i would like you to read this because i think i need more figurative language and/or strong verbs and adjetives, but i had a hard time thinking of them. advice?
http://susiemadruga.blogspot.com/2007/01/descriptive-writing-ii.html
comment this one
its good
http://fivesixkids.blogspot.com/2007/01/fahrenheit-451-pages-21-to-40.html
Nicklaus Dial
Tuesday, January 23, 2007
Untitled
hello mr jana
can you please give me any suggestions on my descriptive writing piece. Im sending this piece because i think i can do better. any suggestions from anyone else helps too (:
http://nicklausdial.blogspot.com/2007/01/one-question-that-got-me-thinking-about.html
Kevin Gudino
I chose this blog passage because I needed another opinion from a professional like you Mr. Jana ;) I need to know if it is a good descriptive paragraph
http://kevingudino.blogspot.com/2007/01/class-work-friday-119-will-accept-by.html
http://antoniovalencialovessoccer.blogspot.com/2007/01/something-i-am-looking-foward-to.html
Antonio Valencia
What I like
Tuesday, January 23, 2007
The reason I chose this one is because it is the one I put the most effort into
Laura Mitchell's "Best"
Metal Concert
Tuesday, January 23 2007, 2:03pm
This is probably my favorite post because I had a lot to say about the topic. I think it's my best one too. That's why I want you to read it.
http://lauramitchellspeaksgerman.blogspot.com/2007/01/something-i-enjoy.html
Class Work Friday 1/19 (Shots)
Fridy 1/19/07
I would like you to read this one becuase i'm not sure if it is good or not.
URL: http://rlopezrodriguez.blogspot.com/2007/01/class-work-friday-119.html
Lauren Poblete
F451 pages 40-68
umm hi mr jana!
i chose this blog of mine for yout o read because i just did, i dont have any specific reasons why i just wanted you to. thanks
http://laurenloveshumanities.blogspot.com/2007/01/f451-pages-40-68.html
Candy Martinez
Descriptive Paragraph “A Party”
Date Due: Wednesday 01/25/07
I chose this blog for you to read because the topic was really easy to chose because I love to party but it was hard putting it into a paragraph with the requirements. I would like feedback on what I can improve next time.
URL:http://candymartinez619.blogspot.com/2007/01/descriptive-paragraph_26.html
Mike Corbin
Fahrenheit 451 pp. 21-40
I chose this one because it is a rather controversial and debatable subject.
http://mikecorbin.blogspot.com/2007/01/fahrenheit-451-pp-21-40.html
hey Mr.Jana here is the web site
http://austinhan.blogspot.com/2007/01/friday-january-19-2007-class-work.html
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